The Grand Mosque of Paris
1) The grand mosque of Paris talks
about the discrimination that the Jews lived in France, and how the Kabyles did
some things to help them in order to get their freedom. In the World War II in
France there was not people to work in factories to do the hard work and the
things that the country needed. In that war France lost lots of people for this
reason they obligated Jews to work in there. This reading is related with the
key terms of the two units, for that reason I related with the Nazi culture,
Nazis discriminated Jews for the differences between them and also related with
the Muslims creativity because they made plans to help Jews escaped from Paris.
They imagined how and what ways they could use to be free.

2) If I had been a Jew at that time and
had to escaped from Nazi people in France. I had escaped before the war end, I
had made a plan with some people to plan and organize the ways to escape. First
we had waits until all Nazis had gone to sleep and take advantage of the night
and use sub terrain tunnels to go to the mosque. Once we had being in the
mosque split up in groups to escape more effectively and not at the same time.
I had used commercials boat that returns without merchandise and hide the Jews
in the down part of the boat. Finally when we had been free in another country
I organize how we could live in that new country, for example, what we can do
to find a work and a house. I am sure
that in that case that we had to escape I had done all possible to be free,
because is not fair that Jewish for the differences in culture and the problems
that they had with Nazis. They had to be prisoners and do that they said.
Jewish people deserved to be free because they had rights in the same way as
Nazis had.
the story is some kind amusing but, it doesn't means it is original in that aspect I think you could have done better, because its the same as always (make a plan with other people, sneak, then escape) and you should have been more detailed when narrating what were you going to do. If I had to do something to help you escape in some way... well that depends on who I am in that time but if I was probably a Kabyle i would have helped you as much as I can with supplies and food and also clothes so you can disguise maybe. that's all I have to say, thank you for your attention. ( I'm sorry if it was a little bit rough but it's for the grade you know how it is :) )
ResponderEliminarGood job, I am happy that you are a critical person, that means you take your work seriously. Still, I could find some of the things interesting in your partner's blog.
EliminarGood job, I am happy that you are a critical person, that means you take your work seriously. Still, I could find some of the things interesting in your partner's blog.
EliminarThis story is some sort of an emotional roller coaster, but i likeit it gives the story a little bit more of excitement. When i first read this, i was not that happy because it does not give such a detailed aspect of the things you were throught for getting your wished f4eedom. When i read it twice i found it really intersting and that is why i am giving you a very good critic.
ResponderEliminarThe same comment I gave to Marcelo, I find it good when my students are critical, and besides are not biased, as you do. I am also happy that in your case you gave it a second chance by reading the blog twice. This is a good thing to do always. You might know that things are not completely wrong, there is always something you can find right in every story (well, almost...)
EliminarThe same comment I gave to Marcelo, I find it good when my students are critical, and besides are not biased, as you do. I am also happy that in your case you gave it a second chance by reading the blog twice. This is a good thing to do always. You might know that things are not completely wrong, there is always something you can find right in every story (well, almost...)
EliminarThis story is some sort of an emotional roller coaster, but i likeit it gives the story a little bit more of excitement. When i first read this, i was not that happy because it does not give such a detailed aspect of the things you were throught for getting your wished f4eedom. When i read it twice i found it really intersting and that is why i am giving you a very good critic.
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